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SpasDragonStudios — Another portrait practice of Daniel

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Published: 2017-01-22 21:13:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 418; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Description  Idk just trying to scribble shits in hopes of improvement but I am still not happy with this at all
I was gonna post this a few days ago but I kept adding onto it cus I was self-conscious about it but it still doesn't really look any better 

With that said, please critique the fuck out of this. I would love some helpful tips 'n shit so my future faces will not look as constipated and embarrassing to post :'V
(Just, please don't spam the critique box with random phrases.)

art and character (c) me
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Comments: 5

HannesTheMelon [2017-01-22 21:29:14 +0000 UTC]

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This drawing is amazing! but if it's Realism you are going for; You should try to make the eyes a bit smaller, and the neck would be thicker, and the mouth would be as wide as the eyes, where the corners of the mouth align with the pupils.

Also, The forehead needs to be larger, -OR- the eyes need to be down lower, The Eyes should be right at the top of where the ears are. And if you want to add ears, The ears would be as big at the points between the eyes, and the nose for the ear sizes.

Take this image for example, imgs-steps-dragoart-386112.c.c…

you might already know about all this, but just some friendly advice :'D

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Mailil78 [2017-01-23 19:17:55 +0000 UTC]

he looks like shaggy   

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SpasDragonStudios In reply to Mailil78 [2017-01-23 20:38:23 +0000 UTC]

ruh roh raggy 

rrringer up my rutt ooooo

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Mailil78 In reply to SpasDragonStudios [2017-01-23 21:36:40 +0000 UTC]

 yesh

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junglebuzzard [2017-01-22 21:14:02 +0000 UTC]

You've done it again....Spectacular...

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