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saphiro β Comic Page 1 of .... dunno
Published: 2005-03-21 10:54:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 3452; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 179
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this is a short comic(my first comic
)Its a Transformation comic n_nU(into a merguy)
Please, critics are really welcome n_n
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Comments: 34
you should continue this it's good so far
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im thinking about re-doing it...but dunno when
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you really should i would love to see it
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perhaps you can upload the comic on
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i hope you can do it this way because i really want to see his transformation
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ill maybe redo this one and finish it
stay tunned
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I love this if you are doing the next pages I would give you a hug so your spine snap in two (I am a very huggy person, but i want hurt you) ^^
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that's a pity because I like such kind of sequence
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T_T where's the next? waaaa if this accs dead......waaaaa T_T i wanna see the rest T_T
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dunno, i cant draw anymore
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Hmmm, good start. Can't wait to see what happens next *moves to next page*
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Nice beginning. Just wondering, um, are you going to post up the next page?
Anyway, it's great
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You are going to write the continuation when?
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this account is kinda dead
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I think it's official that everyone loves the crab now X3
(I know I do)
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bwahahaha! now I have a feeling like the crab is going to do something....
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mmm, la mano q se ve en la ultima viΓ±eta tiene los dedos raros, deberias mirarte algun libro de anatomia, se kedaria mas profesional
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That's awsome, the clouds look like a photo (are the clouds a photo?). I do have one suggestion tho, the horizon line, it might be better to make that line thinner or remove it altogether, because the sky and the water look so good the thick horizon line looks a little out of place and takes away from the scene, imo. Anyways, amazing greyscale job.
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verry nice direction of the comic. the big picture to small movement thing really works for story telling especally for the intro....but im sure you already knew this. good job
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hehe, im a newbie, but yes, i know a little bit n_nU thanks!!
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wow, awesome panels! love the shading and grey scale. the little crab is cute.
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Cool, it looks very good, melikes the character already and the tones are great.
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Good job here Saphiro. The gray scaling is well done. The only thing I worry about is how the rocks look like sand or gravel but hey, I guess they could be.
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me encantan los detalles, estan muy trabajados. sobre todo las rocas de la isla.
Es un trabajo estupendo.... y buen uso de las tramas!!
ah! lo mejor es el cangrejo XDDDD
Ahora en serio, me gusta mucho...A ver si voy aprendiendo ^^U
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I like the detail, its very involved. And the crab just rocks.
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yeah!! crab starts all the thing in next page n_n hehe
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