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nancy0039 — I have a glass heart
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(I write this poem.If there is any mistake about grammar,please help me correct them
,thank you~)I have a heart,it is made of glass.
This heart is very fragile,
So I hold it carefully,
walk discreetly on the tightwire.
The end is undiscovered.
I have a heart,it is made of glass.
This heart is very fragile,
So I just lift it up lightly.
I am scared that it will break to pieces if I put more my strength,
guard my pimping happiness prudently.
Overpass this step,hold out the next step.
The end is undiscovered .
I have a heart,it is made of glass.
This heart is very fragile.
So I cuddle it softly,
enjoying this happiness.
I would rather select this kind of painful but sweet feeling
than have endless and fragmentized loneliness after a fall from the tightwire
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Comments: 13
i am very very joyful that your piece has completely described the meaning of my da name.
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This is so soft and touching, you should really write more poems.
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Illustration is nice, thus it's little bit 'raw'.
Poem is neat.
I found few, minor mistakes & corrected them, as you wished.
"I have a heart, it it's made of glass.
This heart is very fragile,
So I hold it carefully,
walk discreetly on the tight wire.
The end is undiscovered.
I have a heart,it it's made of glass.
This heart is very fragile,
So I just lift it up lightly.
I am scared that it will break to pieces if I put more my strength,
guard my pimping happiness prudently.
Overpass this step, hold out the next step.
The end is undiscovered .
I have a heart,it it's made of glass.
This heart is very fragile.
So I cuddle it softly,
enjoying this happiness.
I would rather select this kind of painful but sweet feeling
than have endless and fragmented loneliness after a fall from the tight wire."
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Graceful, fragile, gossamer and lovely; lyrically and movingly accomplished...
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Such a lovely poem complimented by a pretty picture.
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i love the poen
maybe the word pimping is wrong??
it seems so sad... did someone break your heart ??
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no,haha,just...chatted with my best friend yesterday~~
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A really moving piece, especially with that poem. <3
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