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line art for reynard city out of shape - issue coming soon.copyright Susie Hampton for Polycomical comics.
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It looks great, but here are a few pointers I could give you.
o Get a circle template or a compass, to make your circles more symetrical
o Use more blacks for shadows and negative space.
o The flow of action at the end is a little muddled, hard to distinquish what happened.
Please don't be offended by anything I said, I am merely trying to give you an honest critique and help you be even more awesome. Keep up the great work. Possibly reading the books, How to Draw Comics the Marvel Way, or the Wizard 101 books, may also assist you in your endevour.
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Thats awesome thanks very much, ill definitely do that on the next pages 
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Any help I can give, I will gladly give. Still trying to learn myself LOL.
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Personally I think this is top quality. Love the cheeky grin
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