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Description Title: Nothing is Whole and Nothing is Broken
Genre: Kingdom Hearts (fancomic)
Rating: PG14
Pairings: Axel/Roxas, Zexion/Demyx, Xemnas/Saïx, etc.
Summary: The story of Roxas and Axel, starting from Roxas's birth. This story is also the story of Rojar and Elliot, the reincarnations of Roxas and Axel. Hilarity, drama, angst, and insanity ensues. Enjoy.
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characters and setting is copyright Square enix
ideas, story, and art are copyright me

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script:

1-Roxas: Well attack better!
2-Michelle: I am! [Fire which burns all fears away]
3/4-Fighter!Heartless: [DARKNESS FALLS]
5-Sacrifice!Nobody: [fire fails and falters. darkness over whelms.]
6-R: Hey! Do something!
7-M: Shut up! [Out light protects us.]
8-R: That's not how you do it!
9-M: Then you do it!
10-R: FINE. I will. (thinking: these guys remind me of Xemnas with their "darkness" and ranting.. that's it!)
11-R: [LIGHT is what made me, what fills me, and what protects me. LIGHT is what I am.]
12-R: [LIGHT has no fear.]
13-R: [no pain.]
14-R: [no sadness.]
15-R: [LIGHT is pure and unbroken.]
16-R: [AND it devours those in its way.]
17-R: Sigh...
18-M: What are you?!
19-Demyx: He's Roxas.

[Yea, Roxas is kinda... breaking any and all rules of Loveless-style battling while kicking arse. Michelle is understandably very confused. Originally I had her saying "What are you that can be a Fighter and a Sacrifice at the same time!?" but that was too wordy and didn't get the real total OMFGWTFBBQ moment she is having. Plus, Roxas is doing more than just that. He's like.. showing off his 'true nature' to them. A being of Light, with no Heart. How sad. *bounces off skipping and giggling insanely*

....btw, whose bright idea was it to have this part of the story in the Loveless world? (sadly, it was prolly mine) ....I HATE DRAWING BATTLES, and now, I HATE WORD-BATTLES MOAR. D:

I'm sad, Mic and Gab are leaving on the next page. I was growing fond of my random OCs that I just randomly stuck in there... >.>;... Is it just me or has Gab gotten cuter and cuter and Mic gotten taller and taller...]
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Comments: 49

RainbowDurr [2012-03-16 01:49:55 +0000 UTC]

Demyx just seems like a bad ass at the end with hes: "He's Roxas."

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7heart [2011-09-24 18:19:30 +0000 UTC]

ROXY GGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OVERLOAD WITH AWSOMESS GGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH *twiches* ROXY *shutters* all better

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coolchick01 [2010-10-04 00:26:06 +0000 UTC]

Roxas rox yur sox off! XD

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cranblerry [2009-06-05 14:33:25 +0000 UTC]

Epic last line, Demyx.

I just started reading this again and I'm hooked once more. Is this something you'll be working on over the summer more? Hopefully? ^_____^

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Kit55 In reply to cranblerry [2009-06-06 05:32:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm trying to get it done before 358/2 Days comes out in America... which it will in August. So if I get my way, yes, the comic will be coming out a bunch all summer.

My muse however isn't totally agreeing with this. >.>;

I'm glad you still like it after the re-read! :3

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cranblerry In reply to Kit55 [2009-07-09 08:26:48 +0000 UTC]

I just bought a DS case with Roxas, Axel, and Xion on it.

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Kit55 In reply to cranblerry [2009-07-20 17:49:44 +0000 UTC]

I have that one too~ <3

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cranblerry In reply to Kit55 [2009-08-03 00:34:29 +0000 UTC]

I had to buy a DSi just for it, but I'm happy with it~ :'D

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Capeircorn [2009-06-04 19:10:09 +0000 UTC]

write more please! *hands roxas plushie* THERE YA GO!

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Capeircorn In reply to Capeircorn [2009-06-08 19:09:13 +0000 UTC]

WAIT! NOW I FOUND THE COMIC! YAAAY! and don't worry, i have too much roxas stuffs.

.....

*stares at pile*

craaaaaaaaapp...

*pulls out expensive box*
*puts all the amazing crap in it*

YAY NOW ITS PRETTIER THAN BEFORE!

*puts beautiful crap on display*

hehehehe...............

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Kit55 In reply to Capeircorn [2009-06-06 05:08:04 +0000 UTC]

YAY! *adds to pile of Roxas-themed items.. then stares at said pile* ... OMG I'M BECOMING AXEL. NOOOOOOOOOO~

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Capeircorn In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-06 23:11:03 +0000 UTC]

my friend is axel. and the other is zexion. and im roxas. thats who were going to cosplay as in like two weeks! I GOT MY WIG TODAY AND SO DID ZEXION.

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Kit55 In reply to Capeircorn [2009-06-08 01:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Didja see the comic inspired by the Axel comment? lol.

YAY! I have a Zexy wig, but my hair is insane to try to get under it. I need something to help.

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Capeircorn In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-08 19:05:13 +0000 UTC]

get a wig cap. i just had my hair cut, so its easy to get it in, but you might needs it. *snicker*

i loooooooove snickers.....

OFF TOPIC.

........

i looooooooooooove Hot Topic.............

goddangit.

and wait, which comic is that? must... go... find...

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Kit55 In reply to Capeircorn [2009-06-09 05:53:23 +0000 UTC]

Yea, I prolly will. I'm trying to get my hair cut as well though.

Twix are my favorite candy.

XD Hot Topic is an awesome place to find armwarmers and random nicknacks.

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Capeircorn In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-09 18:31:59 +0000 UTC]

thats where i got most of my costume. we're wearing normal clothes instead of cloaks cause we can't find org. 13 cloaks cept online.

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red-chrunch-berry [2009-06-04 17:16:32 +0000 UTC]

YAYNESS!!XD Demyx's face is just too awesome! I lvoe it! He's all like; 'grrrrr.....Imma bite your cookie!' I like Roxas' speech of light.

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Kit55 In reply to red-chrunch-berry [2009-06-06 05:23:19 +0000 UTC]

lol, I'm glad you like his speech. It took a heck of a long time to figure out what he was going to say, lol.

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red-chrunch-berry In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-06 17:48:49 +0000 UTC]

I can see that. I never would have been able to do that. It would have turned out weird....

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firewolf013 [2009-06-04 02:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Roxas is epic win. He can't lose!!

And just out of curiosity, what's going on with the switching of Apearence between Axel and roxas? I understand that its some sort of dream thing, but I,m not getting much. Help is gracefully wanted.

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Kit55 In reply to firewolf013 [2009-06-06 05:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yea, sorry a lot of people have been confused by it. See this part of the story is basically all a dream/memories of Roxas and Axel from the point of views of Rojar and Elliot, who are Roxas and Axel's reincarnations.

Basically the story begins inside of a memory/flashback and the bits about Rojar, Elliot, and the bus stop is all in the 'future', but will eventually be where the story goes after I'm done with Roxas and Axel's lives in the KH games.

If you're still confused, feel free to smack me and tell me to explain it better I realize I really should have explained it better in the comic itself... >.>;

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firewolf013 In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-07 15:33:36 +0000 UTC]

-eyes shine- Ah thank you!! I'm understanding alot better now!

I might tap you on the head (I don't like hitting people) Later when things get a bit too lucid for me.

Thank you again!

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Kit55 In reply to firewolf013 [2009-06-08 01:26:01 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

Lol, I don't mind. I play soccer and have gotten hit in the head by soccer balls far too many times, and not even waver in my running. (insanity? What are you talking about? Oh that insanity. Yep, that's mine.)

You're very welcome!

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firewolf013 In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-08 20:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Soccer? I hope it is at the very least amusing when you play.

Insanity smanity, we're all crazy here.

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Kit55 In reply to firewolf013 [2009-06-09 05:52:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm told I'm a bit scary, considering the way I'll be beaned in the head by someone not two feet away, kicking like they're scoring a goal, and "not notice". I find the whole thing hilarious.

Has anyone here ever even met someone sane? I never have.

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firewolf013 In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-09 23:17:59 +0000 UTC]

O.O Are you alright? Does it throb sometimes?

I've never met anyone sane either.

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Kit55 In reply to firewolf013 [2009-06-10 04:44:45 +0000 UTC]

XD I guess it hurts. It runs in my family to be so high on adrenaline that we don't feel the pain until after the game is over. My head's perfectly fine (apart from the random insanity here and there), and my dad often yells at me after I get beaned in the head in a game, that if I "start to feel dizzy or ill, sit down and the ref will let the coach take you out" but that's only happened rarely.

So where are these 'sane' people everyone's always talking about?

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firewolf013 In reply to Kit55 [2009-09-28 00:13:11 +0000 UTC]

((Sorry is SOOO late life is hell XD))


That's good then! Hopefully nothing erious happens!

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Kit55 In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-10 04:45:26 +0000 UTC]

*well it hurts when it happens, anyway. Not like.. days afterward. That'd be bad.

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Nicestea [2009-06-02 18:55:15 +0000 UTC]

" W-W-W-W-WHAT ARE YOU!?!?!?! "
" .. he's Roxas. "

Epic! XDD

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Kit55 In reply to Nicestea [2009-06-06 05:30:59 +0000 UTC]

;D Roxas is Roxas. There's no better way to explain him.

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Nicestea In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-11 14:16:32 +0000 UTC]

That's true.

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Mosstar [2009-06-02 13:18:22 +0000 UTC]

OMG SO MUCH OWNAGE! 8D

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Kit55 In reply to Mosstar [2009-06-06 05:30:38 +0000 UTC]

|3 I loved the pwnage.

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hml1014 [2009-06-02 03:03:36 +0000 UTC]

wow that was fast.

what is loveless again?

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Rizafan203 In reply to hml1014 [2009-06-02 03:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Its a shounen-ai anime where a person is assigned to someone called a Fighter while the other is the Sacrifice, anything that hits the Fighter during a battle in turn hits the Sacrifice and is about a young cat boy who has kind of gone into a slight depression, hiding his emotions from everyone and trying to not connect with anyone after the loss of his brother in a mysterious fire at his old school and...if you want a simpler explaination, go to [link] and look it up I'm probably confusing and rambling

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hml1014 In reply to Rizafan203 [2009-06-02 03:52:00 +0000 UTC]

oh ok thnx

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Rizafan203 In reply to hml1014 [2009-06-02 04:07:54 +0000 UTC]

No prob

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Kit55 In reply to hml1014 [2009-06-02 03:47:15 +0000 UTC]

It's a manga/anime series where they have partnered word-spell battles and the people have cat ears if they haven't lost their virginity yet.

If you like yaoi or slash, I highly suggest watching or reading it. It's quite good.

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hml1014 In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-02 03:51:27 +0000 UTC]

wow that'd be really convenient. you could just look at someone and be able to tell if they've been around the block or not

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Kit55 In reply to hml1014 [2009-06-02 03:59:10 +0000 UTC]

I thought so too. It'd be really bad for prissy peoples that want to keep their personal adventures secret.

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chocolaterainbows13 [2009-06-02 02:35:18 +0000 UTC]

"What are you?!"

"He's Roxas"

LOL Roxas Rocks xD

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Kit55 In reply to chocolaterainbows13 [2009-06-02 02:41:47 +0000 UTC]

HELLZ YUSH.

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chocolaterainbows13 In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-03 03:05:34 +0000 UTC]

xD

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MSCK [2009-06-02 02:12:10 +0000 UTC]

ROXAS RULES!!!!!

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Kit55 In reply to MSCK [2009-06-02 02:41:52 +0000 UTC]

YESH.

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roseblossom54 [2009-06-02 01:55:53 +0000 UTC]

LOL "He's Roxas" XD Yup and noone would want him anyother way ^^

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Kit55 In reply to roseblossom54 [2009-06-02 02:03:00 +0000 UTC]

'XACTLY.

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roseblossom54 In reply to Kit55 [2009-06-02 02:19:23 +0000 UTC]

XD

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